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Rip me to pieces
And tear me apart
It was a mistake
To love you from the start
It didn't take long
Till you came along
Bring me hope
And making me sing love songs
This is alll pretty basic
So let's both just face it
You played with my heart
And let it fall apart
Your smile hides your lies
Your eyes hide your fear
Just your existance
Is the most deceitful disguise
I was your comfort
Yet I took all the pain
That grin on your face
Says you think this is a game
Just please let me be
I'm begging
Can't you see
Because your standing place
To me
Is now as empty as dead space
- Title: When The Love Arrow Is On Fire
- Artist: kadodge14
- Description: EMO
- Date: 11/28/2008
- Tags: love arrow fire
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Harleen Francis Quinzel - 07/12/2009
- i can totally relate to tht....i wrote poems (not as good as yours) about it. T.T and to think...i still love him.
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- ForbiddenImmortality - 12/01/2008
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wow.
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- ree-ree_bear - 11/28/2008
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powerful and yet i can relate to this heartbreaking poem sucks though living through the pain and the torture someone can give you. but ive came to accept these b*****d people are the ones helping as grow stronger.
awesome poem
5/5 for me.
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- ir_icat - 11/28/2008
- wow thats really really good and sad at the same time
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