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Slowly falling down
Why do we do so little
All gather and help.
There are little ways
We all can help save our earth
Mother earth needs us
- Title: Dying Earth
- Artist: Posidon 7
- Description: 2 hycus about the worls falling apart.
- Date: 12/04/2008
- Tags: dying earth
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Comments (3 Comments)
- blackjack233 - 03/20/2009
- Tree Hugger!!!!!! which isn't meant to be a bad thing
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- RyuuseiWings - 01/21/2009
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Haiku are not meant to be long. You got the 5-7-5 syllable thing write, that's good. But I think you should be a little more figurative. Haiku are famous for their figurative language. It's nice you talk to your audience though.
Btw, it's spelled H-A-I-K-U.
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- LovelyPoetress - 12/07/2008
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its nice to see that someone is aware of the earth around them. smile
3/5
needs to be longer razz - Report As Spam
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