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You want to hear a calling from true love...
There's a voice you can sense
You look but you cannot find it...
But you look the wrong way!
You never look in the right places!
I am the one calling!
Here my wails!
Feel my longing for your love!
We could share each other's.
But you remain blind, and deaf...
That is why I remain just the wind beside you...
- by RhaurenCasakra |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/06/2008 |
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- Title: The Wind Beside You
- Artist: RhaurenCasakra
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Description:
I don't care about punctuation and structure Never really had much practice with it anyway Plus, I like the way I've written it. In this Literature magazine at my school which I help make, they keep the punctuation you put, simply because that ruins YOUR meaning of the piece
So, I can't really complain about the meaning behind this poem, because the person I like is 3 years older than me and I've never even tried to TALK to him XD But it sounded pretty So I hope you all like it - Date: 12/06/2008
- Tags: wind beside heart darkness love
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Comments (3 Comments)
- salamencebag91 - 12/07/2008
- This is very good.I like it.
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- LovelyPoetress - 12/07/2008
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nice.
i dont get it... - Report As Spam
- RhaurenCasakra - 12/06/2008
- By the way, I am a girl, but I just wanted to make a guy avatar, so please don't think I'm gay! XD lol
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