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It could very well be the middle of the desert
Bleached bones blindly, unblinkingly gape
As the choppy sour-tasting wind catches up
Bits of dried seaweed, brown grasses
But mostly sand
And picks them up, up
Into an angry rage
Which settles as if nothing happened
The people on the island are gone
Their camps, little awkward trailers on stilts
Have been carried away into the sea
There is a saltwater pond in the middle of the island
Not very deep-
More a glorified puddle than anything else
And the little piscine sentries dart in shock
That someone would be out in the barrens
Surrounding their little oasis of life
But for the ruins themselves,
This is the proudest they've been in a hundred years.
It stands alone, singular among the flat island desert
The litter and graffiti washed away and carried to sea
The cacti and grasses gone
The earth salted
With no company but the little fish in its heart
It stand alone
Guarding its charges in their island of life in the barrens
From its place in the island barrens, surrounded by an ocean of life.
- by LuciaTheRed |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/08/2008 |
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- Title: Fort Livingston
- Artist: LuciaTheRed
- Description: The ruins of a fort lie on a tiny island off of Grand Isle. There was never much there, and we lost our boat, so I can't go check for myself. This is a fictional account of going to the little island after Gustav/
- Date: 12/08/2008
- Tags: fort livingston
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Comments (2 Comments)
- LuciaTheRed - 12/09/2008
- Thanks a whole lot. I'd like to turn out a more refined version of this one day.
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- village midget - 12/09/2008
- i am impressed, At last refreshing subject matter (i was getting weary of the spirit crushing lonely hearts which all say the same thing...begins to be a bit like a thesaurus after a while)! Lovely evocative turn of phrase, you succesfully told me what had happened without labelling your point and it left me with a real feeling. Write more.
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