Not commin Home

• Artist: Lisa Brampton
• Description: I had the main hook in my head for a while and finally found words to put with the song
• Date: 12/14/2008
• Tags: commin home

(Verse 1)
Everything so new to me
Oh how time is slippin
Its really hard to see
But my mind is sayin

(Hook)
I'm not commin home
today
I'm not commin home
no way, oooooohhhhhh
I'm not commin home
today
Maybe tomorrow, but
not today, oh
I'm not commin hoooooome (x2)


(Verse 2)
Cant ya see im yearnin
Cant ya see im hurtin
Cant ya see im learnin
Something new about myself
I'v tried to impress
I've tried my very best
to be like the rest
But only cause a bad rep
oh


(Hook)


music


(Verse 3)
I've already shown
I'm already grown
I've already Should've been
"OWN-MY-OWN"
But in the state mind
But it twist and it twine
memories like wine
the sweetes taste
take you back to a place
that you wanna go back
But NOOOOOOT Me(x2)
Wish I could go in and out
Never fuss, Never shout
Be in peace with myself
Be with no one else
But
In the city
all alone
first time by yourself
you're on your own
you're sad and ya happy
Confused, but you're sappy
New facts of life you're learning
You own your on Journey


(Hook) x2

Comments

[Daisy_Sakura]

this kind of reminds me of the song 'dreams' by fleetwood mac. I love that song, so I love this smile very good

[Raszra]

I like how it flows, it shows you have talent and imagination. I can tell you put a lot of thought into it. ^_^ What genre would you fit it into?

[B-B-B-BeanCup]

Just slap a 1-4-5-1 progression on it and you've got yourself tomorrow's shitty pop hit of the week: Sugar coated fluff with no substance over forced rhymes and power chords.

[SilvertongueSagittarius]

to bland. it wud've been gud in the 70's. 2/5