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Once upon a time
A girl loved a boy
Once upon a time
She was just a toy
Once upon a time
The boy didn't care
Once upon a time
He was never there
Once upon a time
She cried for days
Once upon a time
She needed praise
Once upon a time
She gave up on him
Once upon a time
Her life wasn't dim
Once upon a time
She had friends
Once upon a time
Her heart mends
Once upon a time
She smiled bright
Once upon a time
The trigger got tight
Once upon a time
She hit the floor
Once upon a time
She suffered no more
- by Creepy Gabriella |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/15/2008 |
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- Title: Once Upon A Time
- Artist: Creepy Gabriella
- Description: A poem with a twist. Everyone who read it at school liked it.
- Date: 12/15/2008
- Tags: once upon time
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Mistaken 4 Granted - 09/08/2009
- This is pretty intense. I like how it rhymes.
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- D4rkest - 08/08/2009
- Well done. 5/5
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- izov - 07/14/2009
- I really liked it. Good rhyme and rythem. You have some talent.
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- Raziel Nephilim - 01/04/2009
- Very nice, I like it. 5/5
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- StrawberryMangoIceCream - 12/21/2008
- awesome! it has a def, twist, to be sure.You should srsly publish it! 50000/5, hmmm? it's so great! blaugh mrgreen
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