- i love you.do you like me to?your like a flower,pretty and bright.and little do you know that you light my life?i would love t be your boo!so keep it real,and i'll be true.
- by piglet9876543210 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/18/2008 |
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- Title: i love you
- Artist: piglet9876543210
- Description: i made this up when i was thinkng of my bf
- Date: 12/18/2008
- Tags: love
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- Canadian Neko - 01/18/2009
- Could needs some improvement, but quite interesting, just try to go for something a little bit more deep and heart felt, something that will actually make people connect to the poem. But well done. Look at some of my poems and you'll see what I mean by "a little more deep" k? Just keep practicing.
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- sureno_rider - 12/18/2008
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