Multiple Short Poems

• Artist: LUNARISxNOUS
• Description: I have A LOT of short poems and i feel that i should put some of them in one submission. Please tell me which ones you like best, because my parents say that the poems are good, but they are my parents.....
• Date: 12/20/2008
• Tags: multiple short poems life canyou

Life
You hope
when all is lost

You laugh
when all is gray

You sing
when all is dead

This is life, cherish it.


Who?
Who can be...?
Who will be...?
Trusted?
You,
or me?


Can you?
People say:
I can see right through you.
Can you?
I can read you like a book.
Can you?
You should think,
Think about it,
can you?

Comments

[x-Color my Dreams-x]

ur an amazing poet i would luv to get a few hints to good poetry razz

[turntechTestified]

I think you're a really good writer. All of these were great! I look forward to more~ <3

[RainingMusicDawn]

i agree with Jackie. but i like "life" and "Can you?". they're good and truthfull. they're not deep but not a lot of poems are or hav to be to be good. try to dig deeper though. idk. but they are great no matter wat an one says. don't care wat other ppl think it'll bring u down. good poems.

[Jackie Nemo]

I like "Life" a lot. "Who?" and "Can you?" are not my personal taste but they are at least quite thoughtful.