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This painful feeling
Have you ever had that feeling,
That feeling from the heart?
Knowing that the feeling,
Will be back tomorrow!
A feeling that involves the heart,
And effects the way you think,
This paper I wrote down
Has just been smeared with ink!
A feeling of confusion
A feeling for the heart
the painful feeling
Your hearts been ripped apart!
A feeling of rejection
From that person that you love
A feeling of outburst
"All right that Enough!!!"
From the person who said
They'll remain your friend
They say "I'll alwasy love you!"
but now look at them
I hope someday
you will finally see
That this pain;this feeling
Are from what you've done to me!!!
- by Hard-core-rocker876 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/26/2008 |
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- Title: This painful feeling
- Artist: Hard-core-rocker876
- Description: I wrote this long ago >.<
- Date: 12/26/2008
- Tags: pain
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Hyper Shion - 08/31/2010
- It was ok. Could have been worse. Didn't have a good rhythm to it. Your grammar is iffy, and you overdid the explication points.
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- tthunifox98 - 03/06/2009
- I liked that poem...It was so clean and warming
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- Renata Of the Volturi - 03/06/2009
- It's really good!
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