World you don't know

• Artist: Planeswalker_DzNuts
• Description: I wrote this in about five minutes for a very close friend of mine when he told me he didn't want to live anymore. He lives in another state and since i convey my feelings in poems better then I do just saying them, I wrote this for him and sent it to him right after I got his message. He told me he was sorry and he's been doing better ever since.
• Date: 12/30/2008
• Tags: world dont know

In a world of lives awakened
And dreams of thing unknown
You seem to be a stranger
With nothing in your soul

Fire, water, and lightning
Are the secrets of power
Yet everything whispers
In voices of wonder

Dream of your notice
And laughs at your downfalls
While inside you hide away
And everyone misses how
You fall onto your face

I wish you could see yourself
The way you keep falling
And all the times
You never noticed the laughter

Oh, if yet you could know
If yet you could see
You are the reason
That I fall for you

Dream, dream, dream of the secret
Fall, fall, fall into me
Rise, rise, rise above this
And then you will know
You are the truth of my world

Comments

[Planeswalker_DzNuts]

haha, I agree with you Quirk, lolz

[Idiosyncratic Quirk]

"And everyone misses how
You fall onto your face"
That was my favorite part. ^^

[MandaPanda15]

wow its very good

[Your lost angel]

Its good, inspiring and i like it.

[Never Forgetting Them]

I thought that ths poem was interesting and full of detail. 5/5

[Planeswalker_DzNuts]

Please comment and tell me what you think <3