Nonsense Running

• Artist: Raypg
• Description: I'm typing this before I type the poem.... well this part anyway. I love comments because it allows me to actually understand the voters likes and dislikes about it. A rating is good but its to simplified. So if you'd please, don't be shy, leave a comment! :) Thanks for reading.
  
  I just finished my poem and I liked it. Tell me if you likes it. :)
• Date: 12/30/2008
• Tags: nonsense running

And I run
At an extreme pace
Through this blur
This confusion
Running from what I want
What I am
But afaid for it to catch me
And as these fears slow behind
I stop
Panting deeply
And when I finally have a chance to look
At where I had run to
Everything is different
Foreign
My scenery saw me for something different
And I didn't like it
So I turn back
To face this fear
And to let the world know me
Simply easy it was, I only took scarce steps
And there he was waiting for me
And I continued walking to him....
Ready to stop running
Ready to love
And to be loved

Comments

[FaLlInG oUt Of ToDaY]

i like it! sintemental but not 2 sappy! its really good and thats all i can say

[pullmyribs]

its ok :L not good like a 5 but ok like a 3 :L

[Xiaoyu-Princess]

oh my god! how many girlfriends you have?!? you are such a romantic guy!