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Crying is all i can do
nothing you say can make it go away
i want my pain to dissolve in your arms
you always say i smile with my mouth
but not with my eyes
i wanna show you that i can be happy with you
that wat ive done won't always haunt me
that i deserve you that I.......I...... Love you
- Title: I don't know.........
- Artist: juvieboy
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Description:
this is the first love poem i ever
let's just say i wrote it for a friend:/ - Date: 01/01/2009
- Tags: dont know love
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Comments (3 Comments)
- SachiGrl - 01/02/2009
- I think you should've added one more I... in the "I.......I...... Love you" it would give more rhythm to the poem but if you wrote that to me I would be in complete awe! I like it anyways!!
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- FredWesley1985 - 01/02/2009
- it's sweet =] i love it XD
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- Moonlight_Maiden123 - 01/02/2009
- for ur first luv poem its very lovely wonderful job ^^. im sure "friend" would luv it
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