Snowfall

• Artist: Brice Sable
• Description: :sweat: This is my first try .....please be kind. :xp:
  
  It has been burden to live so I had to put something down just release some of it..I hope you don't mind.
• Date: 01/18/2009
• Tags: love pain torturedsoul

One foot fall after another, I walk through the fresh snowfall
The boots crush the tiny mirrored stars as if it were crushing
my desperate emotions
Emotions of lost love
The fear of the unknown blackens my path
Crunch ...the hopes and dreams
Crush..the worries and fears
Crunch....trials and errors of the heart
Crush ....the needs and cares of love

How will I trust ....or believe again
The snowflakes touching ground again with my tears that follow them.

Comments

[Dancing Armadillo Mage]

I love your punctuation with the ellipses at the end of the first stanza. Very cool.

[taylor_way]

i really like it 5/5.

[Shadows Divide]

Just to let you know, you mixed up your description with your entry. Yet, I will be nice.