Stuck

• Artist: Larka-love
• Description: IF YOU HAVE SOOMETHING NEGITIVE TO SAY DONT SAY IT!!!
• Date: 01/22/2009
• Tags: stuck

what do I do when I am stuck between 2
each has half
and I dont know what to do.
Every thing is spinning and I cant feel my hearts
I dont know what I can do just stand here and hope it all goes though
may be it will become clear may be I dont know.
Some one pleas help me

Comments

[Gerard_Ray_Frank]

I like it a lot. I know you said nothing negative but I think of this as more of a suggestion. You should work on the grammar and spelling and capitalization. But the poem itself is very good.