Nature

• Artist: Jaborwockey
• Description: this is a cinquain poem I wrote when I was 13. plz be honest. im not good at poetry, but i still wanna know what others think. thanks!
• Date: 01/28/2009
• Tags: nature forest woods cinquain poem

Nature


Forest
Beautiful, lush,
Growing, sheltering, protecting,
Teeming with life.
Woods.

Comments

[darkfiregoddess]

loves it....

[lois_griffin_92]

um... im sorry, but are you aware of what a cinquain poem is?

[riko_sume]

You are just using words. I can't truly understand the beauty and lushness of the forest unless you describe it to me in sensory terms. Like what it smells like, looks like, feels like, tastes like, and sounds like.

[lois_griffin_92]

it's a bit short for my taste, but I like it.

[melanieluvr]

nice. quite moving.

[twlightdescends]

Wow! I like it! I wanna go hiking now!