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Warm breath filled the air.
Sky was reflected on Earth.
A mirror beauty.
Sun escaped the cover of cloud
And watched the silence.
A single drop fell from the tree.
Slicing the air like a knife.
Plop.
It shattered.
Tiny diamonds filled the sky.
Earth took them joyfully.
Drinking.
Drinking.
Another fell.
Plop.
Breath shook the air
Corrupting the silence
Until
Inhale
The peace returns.
Sun caressed bare patches of skin
Warmth was found.
Earth drank.
Sun soothed.
And the air was still.
Rejuvenation.
- by Roobledooble |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/28/2009 |
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- Title: After the rain ends.
- Artist: Roobledooble
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Description:
Standing outside after the rain ends.
Tiny details tend to stand out if the world when its quiet.
A rare occurrence. - Date: 01/28/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Water of Fenri - 01/30/2009
- It kindof has the feel/rhythm of a Hiaku.. but it's too long... *hmmmm* I like it! It's original and fresh! 5/5
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- melanieluvr - 01/29/2009
- wow... i love it!
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