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Sitting perched apon the mountain top
Contemplating on whether you should jump
Your mind heavily hazed within confusion
Your heart bleeding in uncontentment and hurt
Your skin cold with numbness
Your eyes watery with tears of dissatifaction and betrayal
Your feet steady apon the ground, ready to push off: to leap
Your judgement, spiraling aimlessly
And then all pain strikes fiercely, brutally
So you stand
Almost weak enough to fall limp
And you push off: you leap
Feeling the breeze's electric shock
As you come close to the end of your plummet
The clouds fading in the faint distance
The ground nearing itself to you
Your mouth open
Your words light compared to the intense screeches of the whirling wind
And as death's words began tickling you eardrum
As the chilling fear licked your spine
Strong and loving hands squeezed against your waist
Pulling you back up to the mountain top, to stability and safety
Opening your eyes, allowing you to notice yourself encased in water
And his breath heavy against your neck, whimpering
"Don't leave me like that. That isn't fair!"
His hands stroking you harder, now
His lips pressed hard to yours
Keeping you silent
His caring tears, adding to the tub full of water
"I accept you and thats all that matters!"
His words taking away the confusion, the hurt and the betrayal
- Title: Save Me
- Artist: Raypg
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Description:
This poem was really nice to write. It's about being unaccepted for being gay. And the struggles with suicide. And, the caring lover who helped you through it all. <3 I have to relation to this other than the fact that I'm gay as well, but I made it because its sweetly sappy and I like it!
Devoted to the gays who were unaccepted by their "so called loved ones". :P I hear about it and I don't think it's fair. - Date: 02/08/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- claire_luvs_ya - 12/11/2009
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That was amazingly beautiful^_^
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- Minion_of_Misha - 03/30/2009
- Aww... now I wanna cry. That was awesome.
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