birds wings

• Artist: Sora Wife
• Description: It about having wings and wanting to be free.
• Date: 03/02/2009
• Tags: birds wings

Flying birds everywhere
wings so pure and true
the wings of freedom
that I have always
so long for
to fly over the seas
feeling freat and free
away from my problems
away from my tears
forever away from these humans
that cause so much troubles
as I try to learn and see
how to live in a world
without wings
to fly free

Comments

[Sora Wife]

to the both of you:thank you!!! that makes me really happy to hear that!!!^_^

[Sunafire]

I would normally get annoyed when people don't have capital letters at the begining of each poem sentance, but here it fits!
I love the subject matter too, birds are beautiful and the comparison with human emotions is really good smile

[Ghenz08]

wow love it i think it's amazing...... biggrin

[Sora Wife]

please tell me what you think about the poem.^_^