When the Sun Goes Down

• Artist: Sakura Hi
• Description: I was just walking on my street and I saw the sun go down
  I made up the poem and it wondered in my head.....
• Date: 03/12/2009
• Tags: goes down

When the sun goes down
I always frown
I don't know why,
but it bugs me like a fly
I'm probaly too shy
or shouldn't try...

The sleeping
keeps jinxing me
When I dream
it always seems
That I can't be
The real me

I wonder around
just in town
to see what bothers me.
To find the bee
I must find out
why I can't pout
Every time I see
people like me

The rose looks cold
as I know how old it is.
Why it looks so sad
it's not mad
It needs to grow
and make a row
Just like you and me

I shouldn't try
I'm probaly too shy
I dont know why
it bugs me like a fly
I will always frown
when the sun goes down.

Comments

[samuelismage]

nice ur just like me, i dont write poems if i dont feel it or live it.. that what a true poet focus on u have to be in it b4 you can write it. ur a true poet