Big Brother

• Artist: rockgirl2012
• Description: i wrote this i honor i guess u could say for my brother who tried to hurt me and who i dont like
• Date: 03/26/2009
• Tags: brother

My breathing becomes shorter,
as i lay on the ground and die.
I saw you crying,
but heard you laughing.
You said you wouldn't hurt me,
but then why am i not able to get up.
You said you would shed your blood for me,
but instead it was mine that was shed.
My thoughts go blury,
as minutes pass by.
I didn't want to believe it,
that you would really hurt me.
Everyone thought you were kind and caring,
but the devil in you had them fooled.
I try to scream for help,
but you cover my mouth so i can't.
You wrestled with me on the ground,
till i could move no longer.
My short breathing that kept me living,
now had disappeared.
Nobody thought you to be a killer,
till they saw me your little sister.

Comments

[Demonio69]

I ust to look up to my bro....Then he started doing stuff he shouldnt and he became distent...So now we dont talk, he trys to get me to talk to him but he screwed up to many times...

[Pyro Mango]

very sad and very sad for you

[Jallson]

Um......... kinda dark and a little creepy. Not what I generally think of when I think of poetry.

[Sherlock Houses]

Yokatta!
whee That was awesome!! 5/5
My brother threw a steak knife at me once. stare