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Tearin, ripping the two halfs fall on the floor.
Confusion sets in and sends me screams and slaming the door.
Weeping sulking for what I never knew.
How could seven words hurt so much and make me feel like i never knew.
What did I ever do to you.
You send me sprawling you send me crying to the floor.
Thinking wishing I could do something diffrent.
Regreatment and darkness come over.
My chest feels smashed in.
I'm doubled over cause the pain wont stop.
There all wondering whats up what wrong.
But they cant imagine the hotness of pain.
The hurt in the message that u can not hear but in ur head.
Makes u want crawl up in bed and pull a pillow over my head.
But then the sadness stops and all thats left is regret and self pity.
My mind wants to cry but I cant no longer so I stop.
- by xoxfireflowerxox |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/28/2009 |
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- Title: Terence
- Artist: xoxfireflowerxox
- Description: This was wrien while tears flowed down my cheeks and my heart broke into pieces. It about terence my crush dateing my enemy. This poem is acually being published in a book as we speak
- Date: 03/28/2009
- Tags: terence heartbreak love pain sadness
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Lotus136 - 05/30/2010
- that's good!
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- wild_nmesy - 04/23/2009
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awesome!!!!....
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- NINJA SPARKLE25 - 04/05/2009
- This poem somehow wants to make me cry in so manyways!!!
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- Sunafire - 03/30/2009
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A very nice poem, but ouch, the font colour hurt my eyes xD
Also you only did it once but you shouldn't use chatspeak in literature D: It makes me sad sad
It is a nice poem though, some really nice metaphors biggrin - Report As Spam
- AWESOMEJOJO - 03/28/2009
- that is very beautiful!
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