A boy

• Artist: - -ThE SmExY RoBoT- -
• Description: I was playing with my phone when i found a record button and i randomly started singing this song XD lol and yes i know theres no chorus and rhythm or whatever else there is but it's pretty good considering i just said these words without thinking XD
• Date: 03/28/2009
• Tags: lyrics song

One day when iw as young...I knew a boy..ohh i knew a boy.. miss him so much, now i see him no more, since that new girl swooped innn, shouldda told him how i felt about him but no i was worried, that he would reject me, now it's toooo late for meeeeee, shoulda jsut told what was on my mind, but no no noo, i didn't say anyyythinggggg.

Comments

[Jarmis]

Without thinking? Yeah that's pretty good.

But as a poem or lyrics? Not too amazing.

It's a good idea for a song (even if it HAS been done before). You should flesh that out and maybe make it a little more poetic smile

After all, music is just poetry fused with a melody.