I Did It, But Screwed Up

• Artist: Liffyjoo
• Description: Something I came up with when I was thinking about my crush, haha. This is probably how our first conversation over the phone will go. xD Anyway, please be nice. It's my first attempt at poetry by myself. ;D I'd appreciate any constructive critisisim, ideas, etc.
  Thanks,
  -Carrie ;]
• Date: 04/01/2009
• Tags: screwed

Thoughts run through my head,
is there anything to be said?
What should I say?
You know what, maybe today's not a good day.
This is such a watse of time,
I should've never picked it up.
I'm speaking so lightly,
yet holding this phone so tightly.
I wanna press the buttons,
but maybe I'll leave him alone.
I won't bother him at all;
oh what the hell, I dialed and pressed call.
On ther other end was his voice I hear,
but now all I want to do is make it disappear.
I shrink when I hear him repeat, "Hello?"
Before I could stop myself, I spoke and said,
"I love you."
Until then do I realize...
"Oh crap..., what did I just do?"

Comments

[Liffyjoo]

Of course, of course Joyce. xD Obviously I would never say I 'loved' him. I was just thinking it would make more sense. I was thinking about changing that to jello, it would've rhymed better. lmao

[Zuhukanah]

blarg, dont listen to rawr_Cupcake
if u love him, go for it!
dont miss ur chances, trust me i know...
you should check out some of my songs, and u'll see the pain i go through for taking too long to admit i loved somebody

[undoings]

I really doubt that you will ever say that to him
Lmao, you LOVE him
Dude, even I don't LOVE "Joe"
What the ******** Carrie? o__O
:3 I still think I write better poems, just kidding.
I'm not very good at lovey dovey crap since I have no heart