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the pain shown through the eyes is merely
she is dead inside completely
no soul, no heart, their love sincerely
shown fake through action clearly.
she hurts inside, they walk away
can they not see her pain?
are her tears dry where she lay?
or are they blind to her heart slain.
they did it, they killed her
the most of a silent murder
she walks, no one sees
can they not see her bleed?
will you just let her be?
is she invisible to you and me?
she walks the shadows, without a soul
can anyone make her whole?
fix the wounds to none she's shown
solve the puzzle all her own
but she is dead, no hope for her stitch
her heart is as black as pitch
No one knows, for we are blind
for her heart we cannot find
it is gone forevermore
for she is rotten to the core
~ Danielle Sorensen
- by SHiNYxChaRizArd |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/07/2009 |
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- Title: Forgotten Soul
- Artist: SHiNYxChaRizArd
- Description: this is the first poem i had ever written other than "roses are red.. blah blah blah" you get the picture. i wasn't in the happiest of moods when i wrote this but i like it all the same. i guess most of it was reflecting on my own life.
- Date: 04/07/2009
- Tags: forgotten soul
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Comments (6 Comments)
- SilentxPuppet - 10/11/2009
- this one i say you submit this one
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- Rabbit Frenzy - 09/11/2009
- Another amazing poem by Onee-chan,keep up the work and you could become famous ^-^
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- yourswerty4 - 05/23/2009
- So poetic. you're teacher's REALLY freaking jacked up if she doesnt believe you wrote this!!
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- Breathe Easy Tonight - 05/23/2009
- good job dani! sad poem but its really good!
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- LOCKOUT125 - 04/09/2009
- besides the spelling and grammar it's good
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- cuntnugg3ts - 04/07/2009
- Wow that is creepy........Cuz it seriously describes me.......woah weird.... I love it........5/5 keep writing...
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