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More than you, less than me, is the beginning of the end,
Cause I'm more you, than I am me,
And I don't get the signals you seem to send.
I promise that I'll get over you,
I know it's down to me,
I'd swear on my heart, But it's not mine,
With you I'm never free.
All the time I spent on you and the minutes that I wasted,
Every second thinking of you, the bitter sweetness I've tasted.
I didn't know it was so addictive,
Thinking about what we could be,
But you always keep me asking,
"What the hell d'you want from me?"
I'm always left to wonder why the roses struck you down.
Like in the lullabies that used to wipe away your frown.
Seems like my voice alone is more than you can take,
And I don't know why,
That it seems to me,
That you're about to break,
I’ve messed up so many times before,
But I need one last chance, to f*** up once more,
I’ll steal back my words right from in your mouth,
And force your own back in,
Make you eat the words you never said,
Just the ones that seem to resonate in my head,
You don't know what you want, will this ever start?
How can this end when you still interfere with my heart?
This is love and this is hate - they're not far apart,
Somehow, together, we've made insecurity an art,
Congratulations, I guess you win,
I'm now less than I've ever been,
You're not you, and I'm not me,
I'm less than I ever thought I'd be.
- Title: Less Than - TMTL
- Artist: Ame Amin
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These Lyrics are copyrighted obviously guys :P
SO NO STEALING <3
After some constructive commenting, we'll hopefully be recording this for the band! So tell me what you think :]
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When commenting - please try to be constructive if anything. I don't want anyone being like "zOMG THEY IST CRAP!" If you think they're bad, tell me why :P - Date: 05/10/2009
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- Ame Amin - 05/12/2009
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Thanks for the comments!
@Doomshad0w: Now you mention it, shortening sounds like a good idea, although I think it might work without a chorus and so on. I have a plan razz
@RadBastard: No worries about remembering it all. If we shorten things a little, like I mentioned above, I think I might work. Plus our vocalist has a great memory! xD - Report As Spam
- Doomshad0w - 05/11/2009
- A well put together piece, although band you say? I assume that would mean a chorus and such, and considering the length already, some shortening would be probably helpful.
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- RadBastard - 05/10/2009
- dude are you just gunna sing it like that? Good luck on remembering all of those.
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