If I knew how to write a song

• Artist: Naoto the Ace Defective
• Description: Poem that just came to me when I saw her, Tell me what you think!
• Date: 05/23/2009
• Tags: know write song

If I knew how to write a song,
I'd write one everyday,
It would say that I'm in love with you and why I feel this way,
It would have to say you're pretty,
And rare as a desert rose,
It would say you're a looker,
from your head down to your toes,
You are funny,fragile,playful,
And as loving as can be,
Your smart,charming,lovely,
And everything to me,
You're my comfort when I'm lonely,
You're my peace when I need rest,
Of all the women I've known I'd rate you best,
You're the orchard in the jungle,
You're the better half of me,
You're all of this and so much more,
You mean the world to me,
Still so much left unsaid,
It would take me far too long
I know how much I love you ,
If only I could write a song,

Comments

[Naoto the Ace Defective]

True,Maybe I'll do it then.

[w0rm buffet]

you should tell her and then leave
nothing like a little lethargy to start the day

[Naoto the Ace Defective]

No,she doesn't know ,she hates me so I'll probably never show it to her,And she's dating a guy who's like a decade older than her anyway.

[gaelic_twilight]

This is really sweet. Does she know about it?

[Naoto the Ace Defective]

Thanks.

[UC Poika]

You did well. Nice song.

[w0rm buffet]

good thing you can always find another in a pile
you are about 1 in a hundred my dear
I ******** ate all my cereal