Writ on the Moon

• Artist: Cottoncandyocbra3
• Description:
• Date: 05/26/2009
• Tags: writ moon

Shouting capsized virtues
Screams of blackest shade
Utterance fierce derision
Sandman's foolish gaze

Accompany chilling slumber
Frost built onto wounds
Seer assumes the garb
Brow bled nightfall's noon

Clutching last rites madly
Eye piercing gray and white
Through the stained glass waters
Dust eclipses sight

Ghost eve's menagerie
Cryptic wisp wilts croon
Withering fantasia
My will writ on the moon

Comments

[Ellectric Eccentric]

This is a bit of a stagnation in style for you, yet it is a solid style. The optical conceptualizing adds little to the work, this time, and feels more of a tacked on gimmick than an inseparable facet of the poem, in other words, needless. The imagery is still nice, and it isn't a bad poem. 3/5.