Never

• Artist: the devils angel666
• Description: i changed the last lines.. im not sure why, but it didnt rhyme
• Date: 06/27/2009
• Tags: never

I believe in crystal stars
drops of blood
black as tar

I believe in being true
finding me
losing you

I believe in doing good
losing faith
we all could

I believe in musics lure
wining games
being sure

I believe we all have truth
but we must find it
like a sluth

i believed in all of this
like summers sun
it was my bliss

I believed but now im gone
but all of this
must be carried on

I believe thats why your here
to carry on
what I held dear

Comments

[the devils angel666]

omg.. i didnt even post this.. i wrote this in 3rd grade. i wonder who put it up...

[Katsumi_Kiyoko]

You did well with the rhyming it flowed very nicely together but the story i felt it was say not so well flowed well together. 4/5

[xXxEmmeryxXx]

its something very well done 4/5

~emily

[DehHiddenAngel]

thats really good 5/5...lol..but...sorry but the ending everything like stars and tar, and lure and sure and stuff ryhmed but then at the end it didn't but it was still very good..to me ryhming is the worst part....