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beautiful rose,
first picked when dazzling and brilliant,
at it's prime,
just as women are,
beautiful; new; full of energy,
perfect,
but the rose ages and withers,
just as women do,
and just the same as roses,
women are tossed away when old,
tossed away to be crumpled and stomped on,
looked over by the world,
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refuse to be a withered rose!
don't be quiet!
shout!
you will not be looked over!
if you fight,
more power to you!
- by sk8terpunk718 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/09/2009 |
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- Title: withered rose
- Artist: sk8terpunk718
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Description:
this is a motivalional poem for the girls that get dumped between 2 weeks of going out just because your bf gets tired of you. don't stand down, fight!!!
- Date: 07/09/2009
- Tags: withered rose
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Comments (7 Comments)
- sk8terpunk718 - 07/12/2009
- but you can still put comments on here!!
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- sk8terpunk718 - 07/12/2009
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aw thank you! i love nice comments! you should stop before i get a big head!
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- GuySunshine - 07/11/2009
- YOU IS LOONY WOMAN!!!! Which is why I love it!!
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- Tinzing - 07/11/2009
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Ok I dont know why you commented oon my stuuff earlyer your stuff is way better I would like you to comment on my others please but mine arnt nearly as good as your....
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- xXDark_ImprisonmentXx - 07/10/2009
- WOOT WOMEN'S RIGHTS! Many guys don't understand this concept and that's what creates holes in relationships... I've always been around girls my whole life, I've just gotten along better with girls than guys. And I've come to learn that everyone may not be the same, but should have the same right and privelages as well, and that includes the right to stand uup ans punch the inconsiderate guy who dumped them square in the face!
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- sk8terpunk718 - 07/10/2009
- i'm glad you get what i mean and don't think i'm a total loony that is too loud (like my brother thinks) lol
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- Dragons Willow - 07/09/2009
- hooray!!! *stands to shout for her rights!!*
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