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ninja Standing on the hills high tops she waited for her one heart true love. heart All she had ever wanted from their first meeting was true loves kiss and for him to say "I love you." She was always trying to keep positive that he would on day say it but when she found out about her betrouthed she lost all but 1 little piece of hope for their love together. heart
neutral So She stood high.Looking out as far as the eye could see.Then thought "what if he really dosen't love me." She then came to a decision " he probably never cared for me or loved me ever."So she decided to start walking for she had waited for hours on end. confused
sweatdrop Racing up the hill as fast as he could he told his love " I don't care what happens to us anymore because I will always love you"At the top of the hill he grabbed her hand held it tight, the grabbed her in close holding her tight with tears runningdown his face.
sad He knew about her betrothed.He didn't want her to leave but she had to for it was her duty as a princess.She had warned him about what was to come in the future.With tears now going down both of their faces they said their good-byes. sad
heart Then in front of the lake with 2 swans swimming in love and moon glowing so bright the had "True Loves Final Kiss". It's what she had wanted since that faitfull meeting.She would never forget their love.She knew she would one day return to him for his happiness over hers.Which she thought was true love. heart
- Title: The last Kiss
- Artist: luchia30
- Description: How a simple kiss kept running though everything ended.
- Date: 07/23/2009
- Tags: true love lastkiss
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Comments (1 Comments)
- ElectraShocked - 08/17/2009
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I love it, but the smiley faces seem to sort of mock it and not allow the poem to be as deep as intended. You know what I mean? ummmm...yeah... well 4/5 from me, fix the smiey faces?
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