Hollow

• Artist: Falcon Moonshadow
• Description: About feeling nothing...being empty
• Date: 07/24/2009
• Tags: hollow

I feel…hollow. Empty.
Like all the feelings have been drained from me.
There is no more sorrow, no more hate. No more despair, no more confusion. No more anger, no more fear.
I am impenetrable, no words can hurt me for I feel no pain, I cannot be broken.
No more sadness, no more hurt.
No more joy…
I feel nothing. No happiness, no excitement. No courage, no hope. No faith, no sense of achievement.
For what is joy but the absence of sorrow. What is courage but the fighting of fear. What is hope when there is nothing to hope for…
I feel…hollow. Empty.
Like all feelings have been drained from me.
And because of it…I cannot live.

Comments

[Falcon Moonshadow]

Thanks for the criticism, I need more of that, or I'll never get better.

[Intrepid Indigo]

Your poem was this great mass that kept repeating it's own emoness. I get that you are feeling empty but please don't leave your poem empty of phrase or grace.

[peu de pluie]

You Said "No more" To many Time.

But Overall Good.