i've seen an angel's tear

• Artist: Charamion_Neko_maid_Desu
• Description:
• Date: 08/02/2009
• Tags: seen angels tear

i saw an angel he cryed upon my heart and though his tears dryed my sadness for a time they later led my heart to bleed his tears cut my sadness like a razor cut the skin but like a paper cut it was a cause of my pain like a woond that does not heal his tears rest upon my heart though they make my sadness more painfull those same tear heal my soul

Comments

[Deadlylight6]

organize. grammar check. sentence structure along with commas, periods etc. >.>

[vbngg]

that's really touching....i love it. Keep up the good work!