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Death will come for you as Death came for me
And I'll stand right by his side watching you with glee
Watching you twist and turn and take your final breath
Looking so beautiful in the face of Death
Ambivalence is surly the thing that my face now shows
I'm so happy now to see you die
But saddended to see you go
You look so peaceful now not knowing that your about to go
When Death comes to take you theres a hissing of the ground
For every step Death takes he leaves blackened ground in his wake
Soon it will be over and soon it will begin
And it will be just you and me with an eternity to spend
So many years I've waited, hoping at Death's Gate
To hear you call my name, to see your beautiful face
So long I've waited to see those eyes, those beautiful daybreak eyes
The pain I felt for every morrow that I was not at your side
So many years he was the only one on which I could depend
To bring happiness into my life once and for all again
Now graciously Death has helped me become one and whole again
I am forever indebted to him, he was the one in which I could truly depend
And as I see her leave her bed and appear right by my side
I stare into those beautiful daybreak colored eyes
She says my name and lifts her hand to brush across my cheek
I was so happy then that suddenly my legs grew weak
And all the years I spent waiting for her seemed only but a week
- Title: Death, love, and waiting
- Artist: Dezan
- Description: It's about pain, Death, and waiting for someone you love
- Date: 08/15/2009
- Tags: death love waiting
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Nihill - 01/14/2010
- My initial comment at just glancing this over is: Don't be so concerned about rhyming. Utilizing other poetic tools like alliteration and repetition. Otherwise, it's not bad for a beginner. The only other thing I have to say is, stay away from cliche topics. Things that have already been written to death entertain no one unless you can bring a new twist.
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