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The pure white canvas has been stained,
the deep red crimson of disdain.
Like blood spilt from those who've been slain,
fixed in your mind like a haunting refrain.
Why can hands never be wiped clean,
of all the things that are obscene?
Inside, your mind continues to scream,
crying for the end of this bloody dream.
Is there anything wrong with wanting peace,
to want the unending nightmare to cease,
to break all chains and find release
and make the flow of death decrease?
Slowly, so slowly, the world is dying,
due to the violence, the pain and the lying.
But life can return if all continue trying,
standing and fighting, and ending the crying.
Blood washes away and the world's still alive.
Ending war to grasp the hope for which all strive
With the end of death all now survive.
So hopefully, someday, all will thrive.
- by Heckova Biker Babe |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/26/2009 |
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Heckova Biker Babe - 08/27/2009
- did a bit of editing... hope it's better.
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- ProfessorKC - 08/26/2009
- Reads like a song, something by Linkin Park or maybe Blink 182 (not that it is ... it's original for certain). When you read it over, make sure the meter is correct of it will have stumbling points that are unintended in the poem, also spellcheck ... "disdain" ... you conquer the basics and things will go well for you from there.
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- Heckova Biker Babe - 08/26/2009
- please comment i want your opinions
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