The Girl

• Artist: R A I N I I D I
• Description: I have no clue most of the poems i write are sad and depressing. But if I'm lucky i write some happy cheery one's too. You probably wont like mine.
  
  
  Please if you don't like my poetry try to be nice. Please don't be like "your poetry stinks ahahahahaahhaha"
• Date: 09/05/2009
• Tags: girl

The girl cry's out.
She is alone.
Even though she is not alone.
Her heart is thick with sadness
as well as madness.

It all started out on a fair day,
She was happy and cheerful,
She told him words, he couldn't say
It was all quite a mouthful.

They were happy and loving,
but only for a short time,
It all turned into nothing,
love is sour like a lime.

So the girl cry's like rain from a cloud.
She runs away,
She screams aloud,
Just another memory of a cloudy day.

Comments

[Mrs Enjoy]

i liked the "The girl cry's out.
She is alone.
Even though she is not alone.
Her heart is thick with sadness
as well as madness." after that it kinda was eh

[R A I N I I D I]

Bumpy~ Thanks ^_^

[Tenma-dono]

it's a little depressing- but i like that! very pretty! ^_^ 5/5!

[R A I N I I D I]

please comment so i can get better at writing. >o<

[R A I N I I D I]

comment please?