The truth

• Artist: cute Jamie kitty
• Description: This isn't a good poem i know. I've done better i needed to write something!!!
  Rate and don't hold back on the comments. Just say it sucks if you want ^^ thanks.
  
  LOVE YALL!!!!
• Date: 09/07/2009
• Tags: truth

My heart cries for you in the middle of the night
hoping and pleeding to find you,
to see you,
to hold you in my arms and call you mine.
But the truth always attack me when i wake up
no ones ever there.
Only a simple dream may catch my eye's
and i'll call it reality.
But the truth was
You are mine.

Your heart always fines a way to get lost in my words
The truth of everything may not be good
But one day when the world knows of our love
It'll be better then Romeo and Juilets
One because it'll be Jamie and Kaylee

Comments

[Sesskogaru]

hmmmmmmm..yea the beggining was good but towards the end it kind of drifted. I think it needs stronger words tho to make it sound better. hmmmm...but that is just me. smile