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My love is like an ocean
It goes down so deep
My love is like a rose
Whose beauty you want to keep.
My love is like a river
That will never end
My love is like a dove
With a beautiful message to send.
My love is like a song
That goes on and on forever
My love is like a prisoner
It's to you that I surrender.
- by LordOfAir77474 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/19/2009 |
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- Title: My Love
- Artist: LordOfAir77474
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- Date: 09/19/2009
- Tags: love
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- Idiosyncratic Quirk - 09/19/2009
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It's good. And like the person below me said, it makes sense and rhymes. Sadly, I'm one for a complex piece.
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- XxX l O v E z Xx - 09/19/2009
- its like the best thing ive ever read i mean it rhymes it makes sense its about love omg its perfect 5/5
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