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A thousand miles away
And the only connection is
Love.
The endless turmoil will
Cease to stop until that day
Two souls that burn for
One another
A superior bond,
A relation that will not break
Nor crumble
One soul trains itself to
Its limits and beyond
Never giving up hope to see
That fateful day
The other works hard to
Set its goal
Pass and through obstacles
Just to see
That fateful day
Even a thousand miles apart
Wont do itself good
When the two desperate souls
Unite as one
And their hopes to see
That fateful day
Will no doubt come.
- by Deadlylight6 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/20/2009 |
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- Title: Hopes On A Thousand Miles
- Artist: Deadlylight6
- Description: plz comment...
- Date: 09/20/2009
- Tags: hopes thousand miles
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- ProfessorKC - 09/23/2009
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third stanza sums this one up for me:
Two souls that burn for
One another
A superior bond,
A relation that will break
Nor crumble
Superior and it will break but not crumble? One missing word threw the whole image off. It's confusing and needs some editting, but it's a good start. - Report As Spam
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