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You want control
I’d rather die
But I am already dead
I can not die again
For thee who die can not repeat
I know you see me
I know I breathe
But you are still around me
So there for I can not live
The life that was given to me
Was taken
By the one that gave it to me
- by naruto-fan888 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/20/2009 |
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- Title: ~~dead inside~~
- Artist: naruto-fan888
- Description: hi i love poems but im not very good im working on it so please tell me what you think even if its mean! i dont care if its nice or mean its what you think about it. i wrote this poem because its how i feel and thats what poems should be about how the writer feels. they express your self and thats why i love them.
- Date: 09/20/2009
- Tags: dead inside
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Comments (2 Comments)
- PuffTheMagicNinja - 09/28/2009
- sounds like a good song one day
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- stella99 - 09/23/2009
- it's really good. I feel the same. But you could try to ryme a bit more. You don't have to.
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