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i am not someone that i like, i
cannot be, now that i know
clear in my head, that
my life has been filled with lies, it's my
own fault, i fell for the
clouded skies and the pouring rain, my
eyes deceive me
i am not a strong man
cannot be, now that i have shown my true weakness, i
hear broken records repeating on and on like a carousel
my god, i feel as if there is no escape, no way to break free of my
own carousel, stuck riding along watching my
broken, misguided life. i stare as another friend breaks down and
cries
i cannot help her
only watch as it all fades away, i
feel nothing, no sense of pity, or anger, it is as if
the nerves in my brain are shutting down
desperate to save some semblance of sanity
grasping at anything to pull me back up.
truth is... i don't want it to
- by fightoffyourdemons101 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/10/2009 |
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- Title: Clouded Eyes and Broken Cries
- Artist: fightoffyourdemons101
- Description: this is a poem where you read the poem normally, and you also read the first word of each line going down. i dunno if it's any good, i was just trying a new style
- Date: 12/10/2009
- Tags: clouded eyes broken cries truth
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Comments (3 Comments)
- fightoffyourdemons101 - 10/23/2011
- original thought? i wrote this two years ago but it's completely original...
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- Reaper2601 - 10/23/2011
- its alright it needed to more of ur own and needed to be thought out properaly. and i suggest u get an oringinal thought next time but i kinda liked it though.
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- mmmeglet - 12/12/2009
- It is very good
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