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My Lost
The emptiness in my heart
Hurt me within from the start
The pain of losing you by accident
Transformed me from happy to grievant
As the thoughts processed through my mind
It felt as I had left you behind
To find you will be a great challenge
Like trying to ring all the water from a sponge
As I lie down on my bed
I screamed aloud as I said,
“Where are you, where’d you go?”
For I truly, truly did not know
I prayed to God to seek an answer
But he said I should not find her
So I will respect his answer, for I dare not rebel
To find my lost in the mist of this hell
I guess I’ll give up, for I am being tossed
Between my grievance, my sorrow, my lost
- by Vll The Luna Diviner |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/25/2010 |
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- Title: My Lost
- Artist: Vll The Luna Diviner
- Description: The first poem I ever wrote
- Date: 01/25/2010
- Tags: lost
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Comments (2 Comments)
- operation doomsday - 02/13/2010
- That goes freaking deep... 5/5
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- Hexavolt - 01/31/2010
- good metaphor's but the challenge/sponge rhyme was a bit of a stretch... but ya do what you gotta do to get it done ^_^ 4/5
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