Seventh

• Artist: Sunafire
• Description: A poem for those with cruel intentions.
  
  Comments appreciated.
• Date: 02/18/2010
• Tags: seventh

Everything begins,
And everything will eventually end.

You picked her a rose,
Did you want her to bleed?
So intertwined in your own greed,
And love is blinding, but so are lights,
Posion is the silence that kills tonight.

If you take the wings from a bird,
They cannot fly; No longer are they free,
And the answer you're looking for lies here.
This open book wrapped between the sheets.

Do you dare to sleep?
There is blood on the pavement,
And it's flooding the streets.

The seventh word always seems the worse,
The seventh breath and she's under your curse.
The seventh date and you're walking away,
A heart once on her sleeve, now is on display.

Everything begins,
Everything ends.
Sinner, Saviour, Destroyer.
Cruel intentions, cruel deceit.

Do you dare to sleep?

Comments

[Martyr In Shining Armor]

The metre is off. your sylables ruin the rhythm, and really dimish the poem. other than that its intreeging.

[jgirl39]

It's a bit wordy in the beginning, especially the second line. But towards the end, WOW! It hits you, hard. That last line...I would like to hear this sung.

[starkid5]

i can sing that =D