Okay

• Artist: Miyakie
• Description: You know her heart aches
• Date: 05/10/2010
• Tags: okay hurt pain alone

Okay

When you ask how she's doing
She could say
He hurt me, she's gone, I feel so alone
But she she shakes her head and turns away
You can see the pain
You know her heart aches
But still she says
I'm fine. she sighs I am okay

Comments

[Tiberia-Lee]

Very deep and dark. But simple. I like your use of second person narrative. It adds an element I normally don't see.