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Prologue
When the forgotten chaos finds the end of time
A diety shall descend from the sky
A face twisted by grief, a back riddled with joy
He shall guide us to the morrow sought by all, his gift everlasting
Act I
Infinite in mystery is the gift of the god
Yet it is sought by all
They split the earth,
drain the oceans,
part the heavens,
his gift goes unfound
Their journey continues
Act II
Can one be loved by the greiving god?
If so, such is your fate
Follow not these fools to their doom
Seeker of Peace, Bringer of the New Dawn
Your enemy is humanity
You face the fool
Act III
My freind, do you accept this somber reality?
The bleak truth that our existance is nigh?
Or do you rise against the morrow sought by all?
I'll stand with you my freind
For we face the reaper, the gift of the god
Even if destiny is barren of hope
Nothing shall quell my silent rebellion
Act IV
My freind, your fate is yours alone
In this forelorn world, my soul is no more
The blade of the god has been brought down upon me
My sight, blurred by pain,
stolen by death, may finally be put to rest
I ask thee
In my eternal slumber
Be the Seeker of Peace, Bringer of the New Dawn
For legends shall speak
Of sacrafice at the end long since forgotten
Act V
Even if destiny is barren of hope
Nothing shall quell my silent rebellion
To spare my enemy, the fool
To carve a future without tears
So I ask thee
For the unsought morrow
- by 5567_No_Okami |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/03/2010 |
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- Title: Divine Judgement
- Artist: 5567_No_Okami
- Description: I love the poem "Loveless" So much so, I took it and made my own version. Call it a rip off if you want, I don't care, I found it to come out pretty well...
- Date: 06/03/2010
- Tags: divine judgement
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Bunny145 - 06/04/2010
- Ai~iiie! Okami-san! That was beautiful! I love it!
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- bram toker - 06/04/2010
- I have never read "Loveless," but it's never a good idea to to a remake or spin-off of something you didn't create. It makes you seem unoriginal no matter how creative it is. Because of that, I just can't rate this.
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- Rains On Friday - 06/03/2010
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Out of curiosity, why did you keep "god" lowercase?
You lost me when you refereed to the god in the poem as grieving. I couldn't understand why.
All in all, great work: 5/5. - Report As Spam