A strange and ignorant world.

• Artist: Stan gives love
• Description: This is only a little bit of what's going around in my head.
  Hope you like it.
• Date: 06/26/2010
• Tags: strange ignorent world

I look into you and see only myself,

when I look in to you I see no one else.

You sit on the wall with nothing to hide,

but only the things that lie on the otherside.

I put my hand on your freezing cold skin,

and start to wonder what you hide within.

That other world that you hide from me,

the other world that I cannot see.

Comments

[Stan gives love]

Thank you very much Cloom and Coolyei i'm glad you liked it.

[Cloom]

I love your poem.

[Coolyei]

It becomes slowly and slowly more apparent to me that the smartest people are some of the most brooding. That said, this poem has a very Gothic feel. It's good, if short, and I feel it's worth 5/5

[Helkiss]

I like it. ^w^