I Cant Give In! SO SAD

• Artist: XxblackglassxX
• Description: It's a sad love poem i wrote when my one and only decided it was over i still havent acsepted the fact that it relly is over.
  
• Date: 07/10/2010
• Tags: cant give

Breath shaking
Heart aching
Chest quakeing
Body breacking
Body giving in to the weight of his tears
Cant give in
I must never give in!
My heart is throbbing
My hands are trembling
My eyes are just so watery
My heart is sinking feels like this is the end
No it cant be i must never give up!
Untill hes relly gone forever
He is still in my head
So its not the end
But it sure dose feel like it
Yet its not
My hearts still beating
My body can still feel
oh how it can feel
And my eyes can still see the little bit of light lingering in the darkness
Breath shaking
Heart aching
Chest quakeing
Body breacking from everything i do.

Comments

[-GracedWithPoetry-]

I loved it. I would just suggest spell check...
4.9/5?

[bluex621]

b-e-a-utiful!!