Thorn

• Artist: Blackheartsd
• Description: A poem that I got an A+ on in ELA2. I thought that I should post it cuz I REALLY like it.
• Date: 10/03/2010
• Tags: thorn dragon dark death moon

Thorn
Eyes like shining rubies
Wings as dark as coal
Scales as sleek and black as night
She acts like she can see into your soul
You slide outside and hover
As you stare at space in fright
For when a shadow overcomes the moon
You know that its a child of the night

Deep in a cave a creature dwells
During the daylight hours
The space is cluttered with bones
And the long-leaved stems of flowers
Oh this beast I love her so
She is a creature you fear to know
You see a skeleton and mourn
When I say this dragon
Is my Thorn

Comments

[SilvertongueSagittarius]

Your flow is really awkward. It sounds rushed at the end of each Quad (Four line set)

Sidenote: Explain it too me. It seems like...it is about nothing.

[Mr Clocksy]

wikedly awesome, my dear. smile hee hee, quietly, sending down ur spine some fear :3