Gone.

• Artist: XX_FallenDreamm_XX
• Description: I just stayed up late one night and i typed this up.. hope yeww like it.. more in my journal. (:
• Date: 10/08/2010
• Tags: gone

He's so far away.
Kan't he be near?
I'll always love him.
He kan't be gone.
He's with me.
NOt her.
No.
No.
No.
No.
This isn't happening.
Leave him alone.
He's mine.
Kant he see?
Mine.
Kant she see?
Mine.
He's away.
He left.
There's no time anymore.
I ran out.
Gone.
Gone.
Gone.
Gone.
Now one question remains,
Who did I write this about..?
I dont know.
My heart just started writing.
Why don't I know?
How kan i NOT know?
Is something wrong with me?
Yes.
That's it.
Something's wrong with me.
Or Maybe this is a dream.
Yes.
That's it.
It's a dream.
No.
If it was a dream
I'd be able to escape.
Help.
Yes.
Help.
No.
Don't.
Help.
Don't.
Don't.
Wait yes.
Why did i write that.
Help.
Why kant i escape?
Why do I feel sad.
When i don't know the reason
Why do I feel left out?
Why kan't I escape?
He did.
Why kant i?
Wait.
Who did?
Who?
He left.
Gone.
So why Kant i ?

Comments

[viper_353]

You're good at creating a 'lost' mood and all....
Just you need to spell Can't with a C.....otherwise it's distracting!!
Definatley make sure you always use correct spellings and grammar in here, or most people tend to dismiss it as being some rushed kid's stuff....still, yours was pretty cool.