Harmony

• Artist: Akanu Eir Nightmaris
• Description:
• Date: 01/04/2011
• Tags: harmony

Listen closely.
Do you hear that?
The blackened winds.
Howling.
Beckoning.

Pushing this world further
into madness.
Listen closely.
Do you hear that?
The blackened winds.

They call our names
to see what will do.
Be aware of their melody.
But don't listen too long.
Unless it madness you seek

Then I will see you.
On the other side.
For I have listened.
For far too long
and have completed my journey into madness.

That is why I have harmony

Comments

[Idiosyncratic Quirk]

I can hardly see beyond the blatant grammatical errors. Did you mean "blackened" winds?
I'm not trying to knock you, but you should have given this a final reading before you submitted it.

Though, I do like the imagery of it. 2/5.