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In Tentative Standing
Old friends and enemies
are not what we're supposed to be,
Parading around with no sound
footsteps silenced amidst the ground
The horizon settled,
on top of the sea,
burdened by fear,
shrouded but free
Attacking and grasping
At strands of normalcy
You fight for what's right
And what we've come to be
Creative in tales
with our voice soft-spoken,
we'll build upon bales
of cloaked-in redemption
Grittier eyes
makes for glasses of the heart
Rose-colored, they were
with a note to never part
The music pounded
Bedridden in our brain
Steps were faltered
Our senses regained.
- by Mecca Against Reality |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/29/2011 |
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- Title: In Tentative Standing
- Artist: Mecca Against Reality
- Description: This is for Jenny. I finally finished it.. and ily for waiting. c: I'm sure there are tons of errors and stuff, but I really dgaf right now. /lazy <3
- Date: 06/29/2011
- Tags: tentative standing
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Comments (2 Comments)
- FoundInSong - 10/21/2011
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You have so many poems! I'll try to comment on some of 'em though. You're obviously very good!
I liked the first stanze in this expecially. It's very pretty, and I love the language and turns of phrase you use- they're not boring and they really bring the piece to life. Nice smile - Report As Spam
- Lir Von Helson - 07/05/2011
- Pretty.... ^ ^''
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